Lava Poem by Madhabi Banerjee

Lava

Rating: 2.8


When mother rebukedmeIloosemy temper
When fathercontrolled meI wasoff from mymood
When my elder brotherjestedme
I reallywouldhave been hatred against him
When my mother- in- law gave any suggestions
I locked my mouth
When my sister- in- law passedanycomments
I murmured.
When my husband took upper hand
I was in a fit of fury
When my Boss orderedme
I began to be filled with rage
All these aremy inner builtlava andmiseries.
AndI needthesemiseries.
Without these lava and miseries
I am zero.
Without thisI have no existence at all.

Monday, December 10, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 10 December 2018

Without these lava and miseries I am zero // Nice tempering of mentality through beautiful versification

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Madhabi Banerjee 11 December 2018

thank you so much. i am happy.

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