Lay Me Down Poem by rita soto

Lay Me Down

Rating: 5.0


let me fade away


let me die



lay me on floor tell me everything will be alright


pain flowing through my body



help me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ralph The Elf 02 November 2011

i love this poem its a bit short though

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A Lifetime Of Fame 25 October 2011

I echo Ashley. It makes me wanna sing. This is my first time reading any of your poetry, but i look foward to much more. Excellent work.

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Ashley Bachtel 21 October 2011

I like this one. it sounds like somethng you could make into a song

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