Let Her Come In Iron Helmet - Poem by Liza Sud

Let Her Come In Iron Helmet -

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Let her come in iron helmet -
It will be smashed to pieces,
It is a notification,
So that brains were not splitted.

I will throw kefir at her,
and also old bread crumbs,
and mandarin crusts,
and the wet spoons with dirt.

I'll hit her on the cabinet,
In chair - face at table.
And many more fantasies
in these two weeks will wait her,

Until I compensate
The loss of her, so painful,
On the hot closing days
of cheerful April!

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Пусть выходит в железном шлеме -
он разбит будет вдребезги,
это - предупреждение,
чтобы мозги остались в целости.

Кину в нее кефиром,
старыми хлебными крошками,
корками от мандарина,
грязными мокрыми ложками.

Ударю ее о шкафчик,
в кресле - фэйсом о тэйбл.
и много еще фантазий
ждет ее в две недели,

пока я не компенсирую
боль от ее потери
в жаркие дни закрытия
радостного апреля!

Thursday, May 4, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: stress
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 28 May 2017

splitted..........i'd use split..... or maybe spilt? ? Until I compensate The loss of her, so painful, On the hot closing days of cheerful April! ........................... i 'need' a Poet's Notes! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! the topic is stress. i'm guessing the speaker had a loved one (mother?) die, and now, under much stress, the speaker is striking out in fantasy at the 'departed' because the loved one has abandoned the speaker. am i close to understanding? ? ? bri ;) quite interesting! to MyPoemList

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Jazib Kamalvi 17 May 2017

A good combination stress and hot weather. Thanks

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 May 2017

Until I compensate The loss of her, so painful, On the hot closing days of cheerful April! .... wonderful expression. This poem has been nicely portrayed on stress. Thank u dear Liza for sharing this.

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Daniel Brick 04 May 2017

WOW! This is uncompromising. It's also sheer action, imagined action, there's no context given for your anger. I wondered if it might be meant ironically, but there is a steadiness of purpose that runs through the poem and a certainty of attitude. In English people are fond of quoting this line of poetry; HELL HATH NO FURY LIKE A WOMAN SCORNED. Is this an example of such emotion? Reading it gives me a liberating feeling. As if what had to be done, is done.

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