Let Me Worship In Your Altar Poem by Raimi Babatunde

Let Me Worship In Your Altar

Rating: 2.5


Time is a commodity
Short in supply
I can't wait anylonger
That's why I want to worship
In your sacred altar
But where do I start from?

The road looks narrow
As I journey through the aisle
Marching towards the prize
That we may mingle and rumble
In an atmosphere of bliss
Worshiping in harmony

You smiled back saying
If you really want to worship
Put a ring on it
That I be yours and you be mine
A risk I am willing to take
Till death do us part

If that's all it takes
I will travel all the way
Walk through the seven seas
For in you, I find me
The bone of my bone
Put a ring on it
That we may workship forever
And happily ever after

Babatunde Raimi
Author/Life Coach/Poet

Let Me Worship In Your Altar
Friday, April 19, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 25 June 2019

You smiled back saying If you really want to worship Put a ring on it That I be yours and you be mine A risk I am willing to take Till death do us part ........./// beautiful poetic expression; lovely written

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Jane Campion 23 June 2019

Loved the humor in your poem.

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Oluwatosin Thomas 19 April 2019

Permission to blog this pls

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Raimi Babatunde 21 April 2019

Thanks. Pls. go ahead with necessary credit.

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Thomas Oluwatosin 19 April 2019

This is indeed poetry, the title never reaveled it's content. i had a different view concerning the topic, but reading it i found another meaning. indeed there is a vast difference between the readers mind and the witer's mind. indeed u deserve a medal, you nailed it. Thumbs up

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Raimi Babatunde 21 April 2019

Thanks Tosin, your words inspire me....

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