Let us walk oh brother,
Without tension bother.
We are all children of God,
In his garden shining bud.
Let us blossom in right,
Hold all rays all of light.
Fighting is not solution,
War you leave in motion.
Emotion we have to feel
Of others you do not chill.
Hurting is not the right way
Love is alternative all do say.
Feel the mind and be kind,
In love all hearts soon bind.
Dazzling star twinkles light
Ever says only God is might.
Let us walk together brothers,
Time near us soon murmurs.
Glorifying God's name walk,
Let us in love ever all do talk.
© Kumarmani Mahakul,1 December 2014. All rights reserved.
We are children of God and we should walk together. This poem carries valuable advice.
Let us all unite together in brotherhood....! We should be able to feel the sorrows and joys of others. Should never keep a grudge for anyone, but be kind and sweet to everyone ! An edifying piece of advice in a meaningful poem!
Walking with unity is nice. Leaf carries letter. Calmness is inside own mind. This we should feel. Soul is pure. Nature impacts on soul. This is a great poem and you are a nice poet.
Glorifying the works of the truth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Let us all walk to the light, truth, love and purity...The essence of your poem is fresh as ever, Thanks for sharing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
picture of ⚽️Pitch Hiker⚽️ xthis was great I wish there were enough people out there that believed in this instead of fighting those cold wars Great write thanks for sharing 1 Dec 2014 by ⚽️Pitch Hiker⚽️ | Reply picture of honest harriet xIf the Bible were still being written I would love to see this in it. ;) Great wisdom. 1 Dec 2014 by honest harriet | Reply picture of Michael Heath xSuch an amazing poem you have written. Everyone should take the time to read this and gain such beautiful truth. Its been a pleasure to read. 2 Dec 2014 by Michael Heath | Reply picture of Chris Andrew Guillen xGenius. Absolutely. 26 Jan 2015 by Chris Andrew Guillen | Reply Note: These review comments are received through PF (Poetfreak)