Jayne Davies

Rookie - 135 Points (5th October 1960 / Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff)

Lets Walk Into The Past


The fresh green hills are beckoning,
A sign that Spring is here,
My broken heart lies torn within,
For you're no longer here,
And as I walk this woodland path,
Your memory is so clear,
Remembering how you walked with me,
The one I loved so dear.
I come across a favourite spot,
The place where Bluebells grow,
Without you now, it's not the same,
Oh how I miss you so.
I gather up the flowers, graced with morning dew,
Picked for you so tenderly,
Beneath the sky so blue.
I'll hold your love forever,
For memories truly last,
Your always here beside me,
Lets walk into the past.

Submitted: Thursday, September 26, 2013
Edited: Thursday, September 26, 2013

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Comments about this poem (Lets Walk Into The Past by Jayne Davies )

  • Rookie - 135 Points Jayne Davies (10/19/2013 12:53:00 AM)

    Thank you Susan! So glad you like it! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,636 Points Susan Lacovara (10/16/2013 11:44:00 PM)

    Wouldn't we all love to walk into the past, at one time or another? And would we walk that same path, or choose another? Very much enjoyed your poem...and thank you for commenting on my poetry, as well. I welcome all new poet friends. PEACE (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 135 Points Jayne Davies (10/7/2013 12:47:00 AM)

    Thanks again! I appreciate your comments! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,914 Points Roseann Shawiak (10/4/2013 2:53:00 AM)

    Beautiful memories set in poetry and sounding musical when read. Love it! ! (Report) Reply

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