Jayne Davies

Rookie - 162 Points (5th October 1960 / Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff)

Lets Walk Into The Past - Poem by Jayne Davies

The fresh green hills are beckoning,
A sign that Spring is here,
My broken heart lies torn within,
For you're no longer here,
And as I walk this woodland path,
Your memory is so clear,
Remembering how you walked with me,
The one I loved so dear.
I come across a favourite spot,
The place where Bluebells grow,
Without you now, it's not the same,
Oh how I miss you so.
I gather up the flowers, graced with morning dew,
Picked for you so tenderly,
Beneath the sky so blue.
I'll hold your love forever,
For memories truly last,
Your always here beside me,
Lets walk into the past.


Comments about Lets Walk Into The Past by Jayne Davies

  • Rookie - 162 Points Jayne Davies (10/19/2013 12:53:00 AM)

    Thank you Susan! So glad you like it! (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,010 Points Susan Lacovara (10/16/2013 11:44:00 PM)

    Wouldn't we all love to walk into the past, at one time or another? And would we walk that same path, or choose another? Very much enjoyed your poem...and thank you for commenting on my poetry, as well. I welcome all new poet friends. PEACE (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 162 Points Jayne Davies (10/7/2013 12:47:00 AM)

    Thanks again! I appreciate your comments! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 22,558 Points Roseann Shawiak (10/4/2013 2:53:00 AM)

    Beautiful memories set in poetry and sounding musical when read. Love it! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 26, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, September 26, 2013


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