Letting Him Go Poem by Asma Zenjali
Letting Him Go
I couldn't let him go
Walk away for ever
Forgets me, hates me
Just not being together
I couldn't let him go
Love was strong
Words and feelings
Made me hold him
Though it was wrong..
I couldn't let him go
Tears dropped fast
Face was sad
Voiceless, shocked
Frozen as a mast
How could I let him go?
Love we shared
He has my heart
My soul, my thought
I guess he doesn't know
Otherwise he would simply
Stay near and not decide
To go!
Our fate is written but our willing is to play with a decision. Thank you.
A beautifully written poem portraying true feelings of heart Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
your feelings are well expressed, Asma. Good. A separation is hard to accept, but when one gets to this sort of situation, she/he has to accept a separation. A relationship is strong when both she & he want to stay together. When it is only one-part's longing, a relationship is lame. It can't go on for long and/or is cause of pain..
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I would like to translate this poem
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5/4/2024 12:41:44 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Words and feelings Made me hold him Though it was wrong.. I couldn't let him go DEcision we make, love and its complications. desire, wishes, passion, feeling.. all these you hve portrayed well in this poem. thank you very much dear poetess. tony