Lina Kim


Life - Poem by Lina Kim

Life is light leads people to a new world
A world with two separate roads
Roads separated by happiness and pain in our world
A pattern between two roads
 
Pain road is to hurt people and be in tragedy
Tragedy that makes despair
Despair that makes people more be in a tragedy
People be in a fare well
 
Happiness road is to make people love
Love that makes world better
People's effort of heaving
Sometimes having life that's bitter

Life is a magic hat
Hat that has random things happening in the world
Magician making a spell on his hat
To make a better world


Comments about Life by Lina Kim

  • Rookie - 136 Points Tsohgeht Sheehy (1/1/2014 10:44:00 AM)

    A better world would be a magician's trick. I love your sentiment though. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 15,337 Points Lyn Paul (10/8/2013 3:21:00 PM)

    Great thoughts on life... We all want a better world (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 18,301 Points Ramesh Rai (9/26/2013 8:00:00 AM)

    Life is a magic hat
    Hat that has random things happening in the world
    Magician making a spell on his hat
    To make a better world
    I agree with soul. good one (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,467 Points Unwritten Soul (9/17/2013 3:19:00 AM)

    The idea makes me smile...oh so good to know many people wanted this, i guess if we can be united as one, magician cant even do more magical than us then! _Soul (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 11, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 11, 2013


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