Robert Hall

Rookie (August 28,1993 / Indiana)

Life - Poem by Robert Hall

I need you to follow this road,
A bumpy one in fact,
If you help me out,
We can make a pact.

This road I call life,
Has many routs,
Some bad, some good,
But almost all make us pout.

So pick one,
That suites you,
That you can handle,
You can't loose.

Make a pact,
And group together,
Take a rest,
One after another.

Comments about Life by Robert Hall

  • Rookie Angela Hansard (3/26/2005 2:22:00 PM)

    Again great work. Keep up the good work. Jesus loves you and your family, never forget that. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Nasra Al Adawi (3/25/2005 1:30:00 AM)

    So simple but its has so much meaning into it...great work (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Lee Ann Schaffer (3/21/2005 6:33:00 PM)

    Excellent once more, Robert! I, myself, think that pout fits best with the idea of the poem. I like the original word. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, March 18, 2005

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