Life Is Like A Painting Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

Life Is Like A Painting

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Life is like a painter
Who paints a beautiful picture
Of a mother who showers her baby
Colors of water steadily
Flowing onto the child’s body
With his eyes wide open
Looking so vibrant
And hoping
He would not be drowned
By his mother

Only the painter
Could change all the factors
The mother let loose
And the baby goes dozing

Articulation of living perfectly
Events were created chromatically
Surpassing all anticipations
Exceeding all expectations
Blanketing all cloudy minds
To live with honor
Or to live with disgrace
In a life out of place

Exaggeration could be the word
But, as a painter
We paint our picture
The picture is premature
Success, failure and glory
Could be your history

Don’t call it quit
When you have succeeded
Look at the painting
The stroke of living
Is in your hands

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 27 October 2008

The title and the content of the poem is the aromatic flavor of life. I like this poem much and added my 10.

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Sandra Fowler 01 May 2008

An excellent poem. The last stanza is especially powerful and evocative. Warm regards, Sandra

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I specially like the end...the stroke of living.... in your hands.... love it

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a nice picture in your head when you wrote this poem. wonderful.

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Katherine Wiley 13 March 2008

yusof-this is really a Wow! poem. Your meaning is deep and well stated. I loved the rhythm and flow of it. Good work. kat

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