I AM HERE IN THIS WORLD KNOWING NOW DAT LIFE IS NOT A MISTAKE, ITS NOT EVEN A PROBLEM OR A BIG DEAL ITS A WORLD MIX WITH WHITE, BLACK, AND EVEN MORE PEOPLE DAT YOU CAN IMAGE.
KNOWING DAT THERE IS ALWAYS A REASON WHY YOU LIVE, YOU MAY WNT TO DIE, BUT ITS NOT OVER, YOU MAY WNT TO GIVE UP BUT LIFE WANTS YOU TO TRY HARDER JUST KNOW DAT LIFE IS NOT A MISTAKE.
interesting, it kind of holds a deeper meaning than whats on there.....i like it
it does`nt matter the way u write it, but the meaning it holds.and i like its theme.
i dont really like the style you chose to present this poem with having all capitals wasnt the best choice but overall its nice
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
theres is something really deep in there thats and A+++++++ good job really good job