Is it better to give than to receive?
I'm a thinker, and I now knowingly believe
That I may not be as tolerant as I could
I raise my voice a lot more than I should
I don't want to keep doing this anymore
I don't want to live like this and that's for sure
I wish that I could get better and get out of this hell
I wish there was something, anything, to make me well
I'm not like the man I used to be
Why do I think that you're all laughing at me
I'm not him anymore I'm not he
Is there something about me that I don't see
You think my situation is funny
You think I'm in it just for the money
I thought you were the nice ones
I've seen many lonely setting Suns
The tastiest drink is after hours
We'll get yours, and you'll get ours
Do I write all this poor attempts at poetry
Due to my ever growing insecurity
No attempt at poetry is poor, and never let someone tell you that it is. Let poetry clear your mind for you, it's an amazing way to clarify your mind. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I agreed with Lauren, poetry is the art of expression by persons who experienced the life as something to reckon with. The ups and downs that one tackled in this life triggers the innate urge of man to share what he got in something that flows out like poetry! A 10.