Life ~ Passing - Tanka Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Actually yes, it is. Excellent poem

How true this is. Bravo!

Marvellous poem, high on philosophical notes.

I agree, our life is melting slowly and gradually.

DJ liked the metaphor.

Great picture of life, solid one.

Top marks to this poem

Aging is a slow cold farewell to life, isn't iit?

Such a beautiful image that slow drip

Superb Tanka...Isn't this life is like this frozen ice on the leaves, falling drop by drop as the slipping of our age leaving everything behind.