Life's Becoming A Landslide Poem by Daniel Hooks

Life's Becoming A Landslide



Life’s becoming a landslide
Your pain too much to hide
Something’s got to give
Life’s becoming too painful to live
You keep colliding against brick walls
Your soft skin takes the blows
Will you survive nobody knows
Life can be only lived through your eyes
Not in someone else’s shoes.
Dos and don’ts become restricting
Life has becoming far too constricting
Friction burns of loving people who cannot love you
Or know what they put you through
Living life for people-
Who’ll never know what it means to be you
In the daytime you’re alone
but not really carrying the baggage of all the rejection
accumulated has illuminated your sadness
and the madness you feel!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Not Long Left 08 June 2006

Title drew me in due to the connections with the Manic street preachers song of the same name, glad I read this it has some nice lines, without bieng overly critical I feel that a few lines could be tightened up to improve the flow of the poem, anyhow nice little number, Vincet

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