Life's Support Poem by Desmond Y. Eklu

Life's Support

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Clear views of awe
Making one for a Popinjay
For the admired to admire
The support of life

Breathing sites of health
Now burning sites of death
My heart felt sorrow
As it witness the destruction
Of the once admired

Life could be seen dying
Breath gave up a fight it never started
Man wished it never begun
Creation admired, Yet Creation destroyed

Continuing, Let's remember yesterday

Friday, May 11, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem centers on the dangers man will face upon the destruction of the very specie that supports them.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 19 November 2019

A poignant rendition nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. An insightful piece of poetry written with conviction. Thanks for sharing, Desmond. Remain enriched.

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Jazib Kamalvi 14 May 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Desmond. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Oratile Diratsagae 11 May 2018

This is so very huge in defining whats nice. Fantastic thinking. i love it

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Desmond Eklu 13 May 2018

Thank you very much Oratile Diratsagae. I'm encouraged 🙏🙏🙏

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Desmond Y. Eklu

Desmond Y. Eklu

Tema-Newtown Ghana
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