How do i believe on you,
You are the beam of darkened light.
Your eyes' entrance me delighted again-
Again I'm gonna the uneven height.
[ A sanketa ]
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You have some beautiful thoughts in each line, they stand alone. Put together though they don't give a complete picture of what you are trying to say and they don't have a flowing rhythm. You do use excellent imagery in your writing. I love it. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn