Limerick-The Sloth Poem by Loke Kok yee

Limerick-The Sloth

Rating: 5.0


This was a little sloth who decided to break free
After hearing that there’s a world out there to see
Laboriously he plodded along
With determination most strong
But at the end of the day he was still on the same tree

Limerick-The Sloth
Thursday, October 15, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 15 October 2015

Awesome, fantastic, amusing..................Enjoyed it...reached no where ha ha ha...100 on 10 for this one.

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Rajnish Manga 15 October 2015

It proved to be a real pleasure to read this poem and enjoyed its heavy dose of humour. The graphic provides one more reason to laught. Thanks.

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Melvina Germain 30 October 2015

Well that little slogh was determined after all, gotta give that little on and E for effort.....

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Melvina Germain 17 October 2015

You are so good at these limericks I'm a baby in the house still trying...Excellent work Loke kok yee.....

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Valsa George 17 October 2015

This is a first rate limerick with a clean picture! How can he cross distances when he is so slow moving! A 10

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Sanjukta Nag 16 October 2015

A sloth is too sloth to move. The nature of sloth is well expressed with a good humour. Enjoyed it.

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Kelly Kurt 15 October 2015

Ah, but the race doesn't always go to the swiftest, but the most consistent and dedicated. Wonderful Limerick! ! !

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