Limerick-The Toad-1 Poem by Loke Kok yee

Limerick-The Toad-1

Rating: 4.2


There was a little toad being chased by a snake
Went to a bigger toad and protection he begged
He hopped into the mouth
Thought a refuge he found
Too late he realized that he had sealed his fate

Limerick-The Toad-1
Sunday, November 1, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Simone Inez Harriman 02 June 2017

The look on the frogs face is classic too. To be swallowed alive.... what a terrible fate.

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Loke Kok Yee 03 June 2017

Unfortunately, nature is all about survival. Thanks Simone

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Valsa George 03 November 2015

Great write! The poor toad walked into his grave! Such betrayal of faith, we see among humans too! Share my sympathies for the unfortunate victim! A 10

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Sanjukta Nag 02 November 2015

Amazing amazing. Very funny and enjoyable. loved it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 November 2015

Hi small toad! what did you do? Is snake or big toad your fate? So wisely presented this limeric which presents sorrow and funny. Best limerick dear Loke you are thanked.....10

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M Asim Nehal 01 November 2015

Ha ha ha....Wonderful limerick, enjoyed every line thoroughly.

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