Lines Poem by Joan Hart

Lines



Lines
Drawn in the sand
Surround us
Where we stand

Immobile,
We are trapped
Our decisions
Planned and mapped

We’re trained
In every thought -
Originality
Isn’t taught

Do we dare
Step out of line?
Leave the world we know
Behind?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sophie Kant 20 October 2008

awesome :) nice rythm

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Alison Cassidy 17 October 2008

Sounds like you're doing just that. A powerfully presented response to the current political system, perhaps? Succinct and ironic, it's a pleasure to read a poet who doesn't over-egg the pudding. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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