Listen. Poem by John C. Smith

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I lie; left for dead.
The Sun is on my face.
All sound of battle gone.
I hear a bird singing.
I cannot move to see.
I can only just see the tree
from where I lie.
Still it sings.
I hear a dog bark in the distance.
and the wind soughs in the tree.
It sounds like the sea
on the sand, sucking at pebbles;
moving them.
As the world slowly spins.
Above I can see geese;
a skein of geese,
calling to each other
to keep formation.
Stay together.
Keep in line.
I hear a baby cry.
But only in my mind.
There are no children
on the battlefield.
Among the discarded armour
and the swords of the slain.
There is only blood
and pain.
But I hear it anyway.
Now as I grow cold
I hear the silence.
The silence of a snowflake falling.
As it falls
and the sky darkens
I hear only silence.
Silence.
The voice of God.

Saturday, June 10, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 13 June 2017

Rich flow of thought which captivating images. A well composed and nicely drafted poem. Very insightful. Thanks for sharing John.

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John Smith 16 June 2017

Thank you for your positive comments. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. It took me a long time before I decided to post anything and I appreciate your post. John.

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