Living Poem by Chaos . . .

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Chaos . . .

Chaos . . .

Somewhere in the Pacific Northwest

Living

Rating: 3.5


You have to ask yourself
How much life are you going to live?

I met you and said
I can't let this go by
No way

She is so so everything
and I am getting older

When I am dead
I will thank myself

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lawrence S. Pertillar 07 March 2006

I made a typo on 'spunds'... that should be 'sounds. BUT I liked 'spunds'...I have no clue what that means although it sounds good! I'm in a 'spunderful' mood!

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 07 March 2006

I like this 'Livng'. Spunds like you're in it for the 'long haul'...especially with someone you rather spend 'Living' with. Nice write. Enjoyable to read. L

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