Loaded On The Tip Of Your Tongue Poem by Brian Kilpatrick

Loaded On The Tip Of Your Tongue



The bullet is loaded
On the tip of your tongue
You pulled the trigger
Your words are on the run
Headed for my wounded heart
Just one more moment
And your work will be done

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
William Jackson 16 August 2011

Great use of metaphor. Life and death are in the tongue. Well said.

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