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Sylva Portoian (1/14/2011 12:15:00 PM)
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'I abhor to be all alone by myself
Like an old bottle stood on the shelf'
Strong immagination and rhymes
Which kept me reading.
I hope you stay on the shelf
Looking silently on everyone
Who wish to drink your inner wine.
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Amy Cavanaugh (1/10/2011 4:43:00 PM)
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I like the part about being alone.
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Ro'ya Abdulaal (4/18/2010 10:38:00 AM)
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You are the phenomenon. Vivid images, sad yet strong tone and a neat breakout of stanzas. Simply amazing and I just love it.
Ro’ya
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Ankita Sharma (3/16/2010 2:32:00 PM)
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quite good
the starting of the poem seems to have carried it till its ending
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Sahar Sahar (11/3/2009 6:11:00 AM)
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Just rub my eyes to see clearly, ....... Loneliness is finally to find us in crowland we dwell....as you may think it is blessing sometimes and part of healing for sick man.....it grows to development, indeed, we usually find some corner in seeking tranquility.....well done Doc.....10+++++
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Mamta Agarwal (9/22/2009 9:23:00 AM)
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Saadat, you make me smile and cry at the same time. smile, due to your style and choice of words, cry becuase you speak of a universal feeling that we all go through at some point in life.
However, the true meaning of life we learn in those moments of utter loneliness, when we realise the only partnership one has is with Him.
lovely write
Mamta
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Lady Grace (9/4/2009 11:18:00 PM)
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'Speak and tell me How to live
Seek someone who is there to give
surely someone better than me
must rub my eyes to clearly see'....nice poem dear friend..
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Rehana Nazli (8/25/2009 3:53:00 PM)
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surely someone better than me
must rub my eyes to clearly see
Ah, I felt the sadness in this poem for the lonesome life that we may all lead amidst the crowds... even though solitude can be bliss too.
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Tear Of An Angel S.R.B.W. (8/15/2009 1:12:00 PM)
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'every time my silhouette says
How shall we both pass the days'
Find the desire within your heart. and reach for it.
You will find you are not alone.
And the lonely feeling
will soon pass.
If you smile for life...life will smile back.
Enjoy all you have
and what you desire will soon come to you
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Rakesh Bedi (7/18/2009 8:41:00 AM)
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I could feel the emptiness deep down; excellent write!
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