Long To See Home Poem by Kaila George

Long To See Home



I sit here and listen
to each story told
and hear of tropical island breeze
that make the palm trees
sway in its wake
and white beachs glemming
Where the waves
lap against its shores
I long to see
were I can place my hand
and run sand in my hand
seeing the deep blue lagoons
that hide the oceans life
Taste the fruits
that are abundance galore
to see the colours of rainbows
of flowers that spread
across its shores
I sit and sigh
and think will I see
those wonderful sites
Will I see the beauty
of the home were
my parents use to roam
as children of old
and hear the legends
being told by the camp fire site
Will I ever get to see
the moon shine its light
by the beautiful shores
of my parents home
Will I ever see their home
I sigh with a dreamy eye
thinking one day I just might

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Besa Dede 06 June 2012

The poem has a lovely harmony combined with rhyme, within its lines. I like so much the description you present the reader with. Just pay a little more attention to grammar and punctuation. Keep up the good work Regards, ~Besa

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Elena Sandu 06 June 2012

Oh you describe it so beautifully that I feel to love the shore of your parent's home, wherever could be. Thank you for share.

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