Longing And Desperate To Prove Poem by Sumita Jetley

Longing And Desperate To Prove

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At some point, I feel I have a point to prove
I sit quiet for a moment, point disappears
I go very quiet in mind,
Quite in mind then I said
Let this all be.

Wednesday, November 19, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: letting go
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Sort of happiness clinches my attention and there and then I declare there is love in air about life, just an understanding with life, I fall in love and suddenly I realize this happiness was nothing but momentary.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 12 June 2017

falling in love with life, momentariness, experiences of llife... expectations, unfilled. letting go...... so many points in your short poem. thank you dear poetess. tony

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