there he lies in his room, so broken
lyk a piece of fray lies helpless to preserve its fading existence
I jus luk at the way his body trembles wid every breath inside
tired and exhausted by the recurring pain
even his eyes refuse.......to cry
struggling so hard wid his evanescent sleep
i cnt even make out wen his sleep breaks
trying to dream wid his open eyes
i wonder wat he sees in the mist of his tragedy
hez trapped in a painful subconscious state
he dsnt even respond to my suave touch
beguiled by tym, there comes a moment
wen our helpless eyes meet
forcing away a tear, all i cn reflect is a wry smile
as the fear of separation terrifies our minds
taking dis as the only chance
i murmur suddenly......'i luv u daadu'
luks lyk he hears...............but he dsnt seem to listen......
[lord bless grandpa
i wish he gets rid of all his pains and troubles
ne1 who reads this poem......
plz take out few seconds........and add a little prayer to my wish....]
i recall the feelings my daughter had at the time her grand pa fell seriously ill...well, your write took me to some painful past not that distant...a touching write, Pooja...i join your prayers...thanks for sharing...10
Dost......do not worry.....our prayers are always there with you.........and a wonderful composition.....though i cant say i enjoyed it....coz its painful.... so no thank you either......'lordbless'....
Yes dear I will..and with this poem so passionate! Godbless! This poem is really great!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
lucky grandppa to have loving grandy.touching poem.posted 10 surya