Treasure Island

Rain ...


Loser


Again the rain of failure pouring-
Its tears into my life
My heart only knows how much-
I am burnt by the flames of fate
Is there any place in this beautiful earth
For a loser like me to hide?
I don't know why does god always choose
My dreams to be chopped down? ?
If I am not suited to sip the sweetness of winning-
Then why did he give me this life?

I searched everywhere in my past years-
The meaning of my life, but I couldn't find it yet
I looked back to the roads I had travelled-
None of them have a flower of joy bloomed around
Every morning every night every bit of second-
This feel, feel of losing burning me alive

Why should I live like a clown who has-
Smile in her lips and tears in her heart!
I am tired of failing and my sobbing heart-
Can't bear the pain of losing again
My wilted dreams can't give birth to a new sprout
I know they can't open their eyes in the real world
Every time they were buried inside the four walls-
of my heart
Oh my God, I can't do this anymore..
Before the fate tear me apart take my life-
And set my soul free........

Submitted: Wednesday, July 30, 2014

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  • Heather Wilkins (8/28/2014 4:52:00 PM)

    Rain writes of a loser but her work shows me she is a winner in iife. nice writing Rsin keep it up (Report) Reply

  • Amelia Patterson (8/15/2014 12:30:00 AM)

    I have felt this all my life...yet for some reason I keep dreaming, I keep playing with hope. One day I know hope and I will be more than friends...and the realization of our wishes will be born. If you exist, then you are meant to for so many reasons. Not all of them will be good. Don't be afraid to cry, Rain. It lets Him know you care about yourself, that you value your place in life. He will bless your dreams, just believe. May He bless you when the time is right! (Report) Reply

  • Dr.subhendu Kar (8/14/2014 4:11:00 PM)

    yet none is loser and gainer by life as when all relative,
    it is just journey along the years of life one is come across
    yet time is a healing factor as one has to wait with patience
    God is never unkind, but one is to know very art of living...anyway quite evocative and emotive poem, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • The Princess (8/11/2014 4:44:00 PM)

    Well rain....you certainly are not a loser...although you may feel that way.at times....I've been there...God does not make us losers...it is how we see life and how you perceive it. It is the goals that you put out are unreachable...your eyes may be clouded by your vision of what life should be....Trust me it is never what we want but we have to be able to tweak it so it works for us..Let life give you what you want out of it....
    I promise......there are glimpses of happiness...just put out that happiness and it will reflect back! (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (8/2/2014 9:11:00 AM)

    At this small age it is not yet time to write off life! Life is not just a sequence of misfortunes and pain alone. There will surely be interludes of sunshine and joy! Learn to enjoy them and hope for a better tomorrow! The course of life can change so dramatically! It is our mind that makes a hell or a heaven for us! So fill your heart with positive thoughts!

    A very poignant write charged with emotions! (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (7/31/2014 1:52:00 AM)

    Its not God who pulled u down it just you need to go outside your comfortable zone to try new life in different way... We cant find new island if we not traveling, n we not find greatest thing of life if we just keep crying... you can change ur life to be the greatest one... U can n wish u that greatest one! ! Dont give up_ soul (Report) Reply

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