Losing Identity Looked Futile Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Losing Identity Looked Futile

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I flee from the fire
which called me to embrace.
Claiming to be truth
And to take me to the ultimate truth
It asked me to cut my wings
I refused

From the depth of the sea
He again called me
To drown self in the depth of the truth
To lose very existence in this pursuit

Cut all desires by its root
Another call he made
To absent yourself from illusions
Pass by forest and climb every mountain
You won't find anything but you alone.

The whisperer kept whispering to me
The pure mind does not need memory to remember
Ever such call to merge with the light
Losing identity looked futile
As I passed by this phase, I am still alive.

Thursday, September 3, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 04 September 2020

To drown self in the depth of the truth......profound piece.....thanks for sharing, dear friend.....anjandev roy.

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Aarzoo Mehek 03 September 2020

The fight between the truth and false is so thin one has the tendency to drift away from reality. May God keep us safe from shaytans whispers. Very well written poem.10+++

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Deluke Muwanigwa 03 September 2020

This is good. The way you describe lifes tribulations even that you contemplated suicide but saved yourself just by your own self will. And you are still alive. Great poem.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 03 September 2020

Sir, You are one of the very few poets I endear Love your friendship and poetry my dear friend Sir I may be like a father +80 years Rgds

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Michael Jack 03 September 2020

Some faiths are like this and we all are tested with death within the life.

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T Rajan Evol 06 September 2020

Life is precious till death knocks at the door. Interesting poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 September 2020

Fire claims to be truth within. And this is absolute truth too. Love embraces life time to time. To the memory of pure mind, whisper has whispered a lot. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned. Thank you very much for sharing this work with us...10

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 September 2020

Illusions of love and life! ! ! Hustle and bustle! Still alive! ! ! ! ! ! ! Able to overcome. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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The whisperer kept whispering to me The pure mind does not need memory to remember Listen to the whisper..10

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Tom Allport 05 September 2020

An interesting write of ones life plight that forever searches for truth....well penned

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