Loss Poem by The Grandmother is Watching

Loss

Rating: 5.0


In the depths of the night,
As they stumble–in darkness,
They know not what is right;
Who has been here the longest?

Like a sigh–lost in a crowd,
Or the Last star in the sky,
Death is constant–absorbed
Into the ramblings of life.

In the midst of the darkness,
They aimlessly wander.
In searching–In pleading,
To find what is lost.

This sigh fades away
In the crowds growing murmur.
This star fades away
In Sol’s waking smile.

They grieve and they worry,
Looking for the light.
Instead they find wisdom,
and this wisdom is sight.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Liyo Denorte 27 April 2010

interesting.. and u write so well =) keep on brewing,

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You tell a story a story you tell you tell a story and you tell it well never could anyone ever beleive that it wasn't you who made up the reprieve. A great poem my friend. Live Well

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Laron Green Sr. 01 April 2009

I love it. well put together 10+++

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 31 March 2009

Wondeful write.......................so beautiful and mesmerizing................I give you10++++............

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Dustin Harold 30 March 2009

oh my dear friend... this is most delicious. The way you progress the point is most intriguing. The choppy style of this poem is unmatched! Live Well

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