Lost Poem by Sue Sie

Lost



Walls come crashing down
Around me lost in shattered frown
Floor caves in and falls away
From beneath my feet
My mind bursts in tiny pieces
Swallows all senses in defeat
Cold and numb from pain
I walk mindlessly away
All lost and yet no gain
Sanity cries out to stay
I fear that will be another day

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
without a name Face 14 June 2011

Being lost is a terrifying thing, I rememeber loosing my mother in a shopping centre.... It feels like that, your throat ripped with fear, surroundings become unclear...... I have to say i like this poem.

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Rup Pokharel 05 September 2009

wow! ! For long i lost in your fine art LOST... I salute ur emotion if u don't mind. Give us more...10+++

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This is a powerfully emotional poem building the atmosphere throughout the poem. Extremely well done. 10 love Karin

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