October Freeman

Rookie (June 21,1997 / Cut Bank, Montana)

Lost - Poem by October Freeman

I am not lost in a bad way,
Nor am I lost in a good way.

I am lost in your eyes,
And I am lost in my heart.

I am lost in my dreams of you,
And I am lost in my thoughts of you.

I am lost in a labyrinth of feelings.
I am not lost in confusion.
I am lost in love.
I am lost.
And I don't mind...


Comments about Lost by October Freeman

  • Rookie - 191 Points Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (4/11/2010 3:25:00 PM)

    a fine job indeed....... you did a good job at this poem (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Christopher Is Dead (but I'm More Than Alive) (4/8/2010 6:13:00 PM)

    That was quite romantic. And beautifully short and sweet. Another good poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lady Grace (4/4/2010 7:40:00 PM)

    nicely done...hmmmm...welcome to ph.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tobias Gray (4/3/2010 9:40:00 PM)

    very beautiful! so sweet! 10+! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 68,679 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/3/2010 9:10:00 PM)

    I am lost in a labyrinth of feelings.
    I am not lost in confusion.
    I am lost in love.
    I am lost.
    And I don't mind...and i am lost in you dear daughter for explaning so simple in words... lovely crafted one and u have still miles to go to, realise it... keep good work on and pse save your heart from falling.....10

    read mine.. love at first sight... mary to marry..... i miss... miss i miss u (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,384 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (4/3/2010 8:57:00 PM)

    A powerful paradoxical poem. Well done my friend. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Samuel Pennell (4/3/2010 8:44:00 PM)

    This is excellent! Please check out my latest poem! It is called
    'The Pretty Things at the Bottom of the Sea'

    http: //www.poemhunter.com/poem/the-pretty-things-at-the-bottom-of-the-sea/ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 3, 2010

Poem Edited: Thursday, April 8, 2010


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