Lost Poem by Marissa Hernandez

Lost

Rating: 5.0


im lost
no one cares, as i sit in the dark crying out for a loved one 2 rescue me, noone comes. imdead 2 the world and yet again noone cares.


felling beaten, defeated and left fordead i now know that theres not anyone who has a care in the worl for me.
im lost

i sit alone in the corner mysoul as black and burned as sainten himself
i call him he answers he helps me overcome my emotions

he tells me that i will join him soon
but until i do

im lost

god has lost me
iam no longer his worshiper
i despise him and will no longer pray 2 him or ask 4 his forgivenes
because i can ask saiten him self
i cant wait to join him
but untill i do

im lost

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Iron Panda 23™ 25 February 2010

woah! ! thats some deep ish! ! ...emotional...nice

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Anthony Sinclair 05 January 2010

very well written... dont give up on urself

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Extremely well written :)

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Donielle Smith 02 November 2009

I've been lost, but the difference is I never gave up, and God never gave up on me, by letting me give up on myself. Trust me with God all things are possible if you just believe. Your poem speaks truth to this dying world that we are apart of. Interesting! D.Smith..........

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