Lost Poem by Sierra Morrow

Lost

Rating: 4.5


I'm lost
I don't know what to do
what do i believe
people are taking me apart
with words, looks, and actions
I'm lost
what do I do
do I believe them
do I turn away
I'm not sure
are they telling the truth or just lies
I don't know what to do
I'm not sure what to say
do I believe them or
turn away

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Myron Clements 05 December 2009

This is an interesting poem. You are apparently arguing to yourself whether or not to trust other people, or things. I also noticed how, in line 3, you didn't capitalize 'I.' This could be a mistake, or it could contribute greatly to how you feel about people: you are unsure.

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