Lost Poem by Andy Caldwell

Lost

Rating: 5.0


I am lost
drifting
in a sea of uncertainty
waves wash over me
pushing me randomly
and the current moves me
slowly
further out to sea
then the darkness covers me
blindly
I can not see
there are no references 
for me to locate on
except the mermaids song
and I know to follow it
is simply wrong
simply wrong
so now I end this song 
I am lost
drifting
 moving somewhat
randomly

Monday, August 25, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: philosophy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Achill Lad 01 October 2014

A creative piece of writing. Most enjoyable.

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Chinedu Dike 20 September 2014

Highly imaginative, and insightful well penned piece of poetry. Lovely. Thanks for sharing.

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