Lost Beauty Poem by Daniel Bernard Kelleher

Lost Beauty

Rating: 4.8


Looking way down the harbour
The landscape has changed so much
Once a place of beauty
Now a distant memory

Kids played in the river
Some even ventured a swim
They even played round the castle
As robin and his merry men

Further down the river
Where once were fields so green
Now stands a concrete jungle
Of cement and steel

Beaches all around us
Picnics were the norm
The island invites everyone
It was our Benidorm

Now all is lost for ever
No more will i see
We let the greedy build and build
No more fields or trees

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Margaret O Driscoll 20 October 2015

Lovely title, lovely poem, keep up the good work Dan! ! !

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Daniel Kelleher 21 October 2015

Thank you Margaret, nowhere near your stander but?

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angel 02 December 2020

so nice

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Ed Buckley 20 July 2018

A sad but true commentary of a once beautiful harbour. Ed Buckley

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Dr Antony Theodore 31 March 2018

Further down the river Where once were fields so green Now stands a concrete jungle Of cement and steel.......so fine a poem. crying over the lost beauty of nature and depicting the loss created by the so called modern development.... thank u. tony

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Norah Tunney 11 April 2016

The Celtic tiger? Anyway your words bring alive the beauty of the Harbour All is not lost Daniel I enjoyed the poem very much

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Daniel Kelleher 12 April 2016

Thank you so much for your kind comments Norah

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Daniel Kelleher 12 April 2016

Thank you for your very kind comments Norah

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Hazel Durham 15 December 2015

I love the title and the beautiful flow of words that capture the sad truth of a harbour destroyed by the greedy developers, as nature was torn assunder but your memories keep the lost beauty alive!

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Daniel Kelleher 16 December 2015

My children find it hard to visualise how the harbour once looked Apreciate your comments Hazel

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