Lost In A Crowd In Identity Spaces Poem by Terence George Craddock

Lost In A Crowd In Identity Spaces

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it is true a paradox yet true
a large crowd of strangers
can be an indifferent place;

a crowd a disappearing space
an isolating crushing space
or active entertainment space;

a chill large crowd strangers can be an indifferent place
despite crushing claustrophobic heat push pull of net crowd
a cold lonely isolating empty space invisible in a crowd;

can be both a good place to hide and to get lost
lost in a crowd physically lost in a crowd mentally
a lost thread in weaving shuttle through loom life;


Terence George Craddock (Afterglows Echoes Of Starlight)
Copyright © Terence George Craddock

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired by a comment on my poem 'To Achieve Life Changes', by the poet M.J. Lemon. Dedicated to the poet M.J. Lemon. Written in May 2024 on the 18.5.2024.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M.J. Lemon 20 May 2024

Brilliant, Terence. You take me back to old memories of watching King Vidor's magnificent The Crowd. Your verse captures the immense power of the crowd, a force that demolishes loneliness yet somehow makes each one of us feel alone, isolated.

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I wrote the poem 'Identity Where Found Where Lost? ', inspired by a comment on my poem 'Lost In A Crowd In Identity Spaces', by the poet M.J. Lemon and dedicated to M.J. Lemon.

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