Lost In A Trance Poem by Carlton Briganza

Lost In A Trance



Love as innocent and pure,
Have I ever felt this way? !
Everytime you cross my mind,
I wish you would stay.

Footprints on the sands of time, are left,
by great people, they say.
You've stepped all over my heart,
the footprints intact till today.

I remember that smile,
The one you had when I met you then.
When I feel down and low,
I replay that moment again and again.

I've spoken to hundred many people,
Some as wonderful as you.
But, none of them can make me smile,
LIKE the Way, YOU do.

I'd love to fall in love again,
fall in love with you.
The first time was more than special,
Once more and, my wish would come true.

My friends are really special,
Not all are as special as you.
Sometimes I wonder, if I may,
I'd fall in love with you.

I've neva eva felt that way before,
But, now, I wish I did.
Silly, stupid and immature maybe,
acting like a crush-struck kid.

It's not easy being lovestruck though,
I see those tiny hearts everywhere.
Cupid seems to have been around,
And struck me in my rear.

This doesn't happen everyday,
I SMILED when MOM WAS SHOUTING.
... Closed my eyes jus for a second,
And, That's when I saw you pouting.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 20 January 2012

Carlton, this such a drip dropp sweet poem..like this poem very much...you pour the poem with complete flavor and i think it awesome feeling was added here :) i can feel it flow in beautiful way, as well as meaning dwell..keep writing Carlton! ! ! _Unwritten Soul

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