Love Poem by Monalno Kim

Love

Rating: 5.0


True love is not true
I don't believe in 'I love you'

Tell me something that is true
Not the fake lie, I love you,
You told me once to my face
And walked away with such grace
You left me broken in my heart
Then came back to put me part by part
But I can't forgive you for the tears I spilled
I can't forgive you for the joy you killed
My life was so full of love and care for you
When you walked away and left me not knowing what to do
These days have long past ago
They were but a dream to me, now they are below
But a nightmare it was that kept me awake
Remembering the lie that was always fake
So I'm not bringing them back form where they came
And conquer me again and leave, like it's a mere game
You taught me a lesson I won't forget
And took away from me joy and left me tears so wet.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maxim Muyu 28 November 2008

Great description of love and it's joy and it's pains.

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Blue Eyes 27 November 2008

very nice poem, i think we share the almost the same opinion about the curse of love.

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Marria Attar 27 November 2008

Wow..great poem, I love the rhymes and the theme. Great Job! ! i give it a 10

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Sarwar Chowdhury 26 November 2008

Painful! ! penned well............10+

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sara }i{ 26 November 2008

wow, i luved it so much, great job u really hav the same story as me.....that's love

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