Love Poem by true love

Love

Rating: 4.3


Love as the carnation, lusciously,
provocative, dangling the skin
a simple perfection
or a heart's affection
a soft touch upon the face
the eye for extending grace
a vibrant sunset
a physical desire
gazing upwards in unbelieving awe.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Agnes Courtney 30 July 2009

wonderful poem.....keep writing........

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Barbara Smith 30 July 2009

nice definition of love, good job

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Coleen Laney 30 July 2009

nice conclusion about the beautiful love viewed as a whole.........

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David Allen 26 April 2017

Hope you

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 November 2009

a vibrant sunset a physical desire gazing upwards in unbelieving awe..it is how love, matures along with timeand desire...beautiful imagination and i admire and agree fully with contensts....10

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Marieta Maglas 30 August 2009

nice poem, thank you for sharing...........10

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Tim Walter 02 August 2009

a real definition of love......thank you for sharing.........

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Tina Wilson 02 August 2009

nice poem, keep writing..........

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