love i fell is a lie
only breaks you down
tears you apart
eats you alive
slowly killing you
it is also pain
kills and you would never guess
It was really a great poem written well with nice texture and imagery. You have done a great job. Well done. Keep on writing. I rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
love it but u kept me puzzled at the end!