When I was about to give up,
You made me give in.
When i was about to hate,
you made me forgive and forget.
When I was about to regret,
you made me appreciate.
When I was about to cheat,
You made me sincere,
When I was about to retreat,
you made me persevere.
When i was about to mistreat,
You made adhere,
To your simple rules,
That's you LOVE
A beautiful poem Titto. Keep up the great work. thank you for sharing
The essence and intricacies of love are aptly captured in the poem. Well conceived and brilliantly penned with insight. Thanks for sharing Titto and do remain enriched.
To your simple rules, That's you LOVE. wonderful description. you have become here a divine poet h ere. you have a special art to make use of contrasts in writing poetry. love it. tony
I just love reading it again and again....... True love is like that, it wil chase u.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
It's nice and neat, Titto, a good start! Blessings!