Love And Dreams Poem by Reva Kern

Love And Dreams

Rating: 5.0


Two hearts tossed
Into a vast valley -
Waiting on a hilltop
For clouds to appear
Tormented
Longing for a tempest
To snatch the souls
Transforming them
Into white clouds
Of two spirits -
Clouds arrived early
Bleak, hopeless and desolate.

This is a translation of the poem 659 by yongbing luo
Wednesday, February 28, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: lost love,love and dreams
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 15 May 2018

Really an insightful depiction of the whimsical and temperamental nature of love. Thanks for sharing Reva.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 05 March 2018

A sweet song of the soul well knitted. Thanks Reva for the beautiful poem shared. 10+++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 March 2018

Lovely little poem! Brief but highly expressive! Loved your expression: Two hearts tossed Into a vast valley -/Waiting on a hilltop/For clouds to appear.....I vote it with a 10

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