Love As It Should Be [senryu] Poem by David Zvekic

Love As It Should Be [senryu]

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More beautiful than
I expected her to be -
Love as it should be...

A kinder thought and
warmer word than I deserve -
She shared them with me...

No softer hands are
there than those she held on me -
Love as she touched me...

No other cause cries
clear as these: I'll die for her -
What's happened to me?

- October 27,2005

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Faith Elizabeth Brigham 27 October 2005

very lovely poem...it moved me as poems should do if they are good...i enjoyed this so much! best regards-faith

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