Lora Colon

Silver Star - 3,971 Points (26 September 1944 / Missouri - United States)

Love Forever Lost - Poem by Lora Colon

Now a sudden darkness falls upon me,
Though sudden, I'm not taken by surprise;
Remembering all the alibis you told me,
Remembering how I fell for all your lies;
I'll give the darkness back as I am leaving,
It's all I wish you as I say good-bye.

Faithful to the end, I stood beside you,
Until deceit and lies were all you shared;
Love and truth were all I ever offered,
But that's about to change, so be prepared!
The tide that brought my love to you is ebbing
And taking back this heart that really cared.

I was there for you through all your anguish,
You relied on me to ease the pain;
I'll no longer be there giving comfort,
You'll get nothing from me but disdain,
Now, feel the vengeful arrows I am thrusting
Into a heart that is worthless and profane

I want to see you caught up in the moment,
I want to see you stagger, and then fall,
You, who sipped the nectar of contentment
While I drank daily from the cup of gall;
I know at some point you'll invoke forgiveness,
But I won't be around to hear you call

Every day I gave you my devotion,
I watched you as the final bridge was crossed;
Lying words you said to me still linger,
Wrapped around my heart, etched in the frost;
Say good-bye to love that was worth keeping,
Now say good-bye to love forever lost!


Comments about Love Forever Lost by Lora Colon

  • Freshman - 961 Points Adeline Foster (8/11/2013 1:08:00 PM)

    Ah, love lost, how well expressed. Read mine - Last Rung On Your Ladder -
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  • Gold Star - 9,421 Points Khairul Ahsan (7/17/2013 12:43:00 AM)

    Powerfully expressed emotions. Heartfelt words, emanating from the bottom of the heart, and heavy. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,903 Points Patricia Grantham (6/27/2013 3:02:00 PM)

    An excellent poem Lora, love can only stand but so much.
    Even so when lies, distrust gets a foothold in relationships
    that trust is no longer there and then it begins to falter and crumble.
    Of course there is always hope is love is strong enough. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,072 Points Heather Wilkins (6/23/2013 9:06:00 PM)

    a sad love poem written with good imagery. enjoyed the read (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,011 Points Valerie Dohren (6/22/2013 2:28:00 PM)

    Very well written poem Lora, and the feelings expressed here are very strongly evident. Forgiveness does not always come easily when one has been deeply hurt, and this is entirely understandable. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 363 Points David Wood (6/22/2013 5:12:00 AM)

    A beautiful pome but so sad when love dies through deceitful lies. Once trust has gone out of the window love soon follows. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 13, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, July 30, 2013


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