A silver shower
My arms gather all the stars
My heart takes a bath
Magnificent haiku. Love has been painted on the canvas of your beautiful poem. Superbly penned.10
a nice haiku, love is painted very dexterously using a few words, thanks for sharing
My heart takes a bath..gathering the stars.. lovely imagination and portrayal dear Nosheen.. thank u. tony
A great description of love in a very imaginative way! Lovely.
In a concise poem love has been reflected amazingly. A beautiful haiku so nicely executed. Thanks for sharing.10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
You did it! Well penned.......... Naila