Love (Haiku) Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Love (Haiku)

Rating: 5.0


A silver shower
My arms gather all the stars
My heart takes a bath

Wednesday, September 26, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: haiku,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naila Rais 26 September 2018

You did it! Well penned.......... Naila

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 26 September 2018

Magnificent haiku. Love has been painted on the canvas of your beautiful poem. Superbly penned.10

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shakil Ahmed 29 September 2018

a nice haiku, love is painted very dexterously using a few words, thanks for sharing

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M Asim Nehal 29 September 2018

Wow, so well thought........10+++

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Dr Antony Theodore 29 September 2018

My heart takes a bath..gathering the stars.. lovely imagination and portrayal dear Nosheen.. thank u. tony

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 13 November 2022

I enjoyed this haiku

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 November 2022

An excellent haiku.... loved it

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Aqua Flower 06 October 2018

A great description of love in a very imaginative way! Lovely.

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Akhtar Jawad 03 October 2018

Love so nicely described, a beautiful poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 October 2018

In a concise poem love has been reflected amazingly. A beautiful haiku so nicely executed. Thanks for sharing.10

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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