Love...Is The Slowest Form Of Suicide. Poem by Bree Swart

Love...Is The Slowest Form Of Suicide.

Rating: 5.0


Your wrods echoing through my mind and heart,
Do you want it to be the end,
Do you want to take your part?

I'm not a mind reader, some things I just don't see,
You say I don't know you,
But I'm trying,
So just let it be.

There is no escape,
There is no release,
I don't know what to do,
So shall I just weep?

I do that anyways,
Not much to change there,
Life's just unfair.

Why must I make all the effort?
Is your love really true,
I have never argued,
When you say, 'I love you.'

Because I trust you
But you don't seem to trust me.
I really do love you,
But you are too blind to see.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hailey Wentz 24 September 2008

This is absoloutly amazing. I love how much I can relate. & it's written beautifuly. keep up the good work.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 24 September 2008

10 for this lovely love poem. I love it.

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Robert Quilter 24 September 2008

Ok..the title is amazing..i wish i had thought of that.The poem itself? Doesn't quite live up to it's billing.However, after reading this, Ms.Swart's brief bio, i will be reading more of he work soon.

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