Love Me Poem by Brittney Miller

Love Me

Rating: 4.8


You say ''I love you'.....
But to you it's frindly.....
But I wish it wasn't.......

I want you to take me
.........And hold me......
I want you to love me

But insted you joke with me
You say where like family
But i want us to to be much more

so Kiss me
Hold me
Love me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
The 4am Poet Worm 02 March 2012

If he cant see the Beauty already...then hes the wrong one.... he is not the Eye of the beholder.... lovely write....

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John Knight 28 March 2010

Hi Brittany - Honoured to be the first to comment again - I love this on Britt because it has structure and flow and lovely sentiments. V 1 There is a big difference between LOVE & FRIENDSHIP and it must be mutual to really work. V 2 I have had many Friends and Lovers in my life and the difference is in 'touch' and the message transmitted in a 'hug'. V 3 Friends joke - Lover love - there is a big difference and the intense bond between a Sister & a Brother (family love) is very different form the emotional love between two 'lovers' - I know what you mean I have many lady friends who love me 'like family' and my relationship with them is very different from those (along the way) who have been 'intimate lovers'. I love verse four it is so so evocative - Kiss me - Hold me - Love me. Thanks for sharing Britt it scores TEN for content and another TEN for its elegant flowing structure. Love in Poetry - JOHN.

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