Love Poems Poem by Amelie Ison

Love Poems

Rating: 4.7

A poem is someone's soul on paper:
It emits a feeling,

Perhaps of great rage or warmth or sadness—
But the feeling, it is there.

But when I read a poem crafted so heartfelt;
From one ordinary person to another—
Though to someone they see as their Beloved;

Someone so divine in their eyes,
Everyone else holds but a candle
To the beauty of their One—

I feel nothing.

I feel lost to this poem;
I cannot find myself.
I feel but an empty, aching longing
For something unattainable; something I cannot reach.

These poems, they are always crafted so delicately
From someone's heart,
But I feel nothing when I read it. I always will.

Sunday, May 12, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: affinity and love,feelings,melancholic,poems,emptiness
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Poignant, but beautifully crafted. " Everyone else holds but a candle To the beauty of their One" nice. But you lament "I feel nothing… feel but an empty, aching longing" quite creative

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Dennis Ryan 26 May 2024

"Love poems" I feel, as I messaged you last night, is your best poem to date, the most heart-felt poem of yours to date, ironically about not being able to feel love as an emotion. Well, what more can I say here?

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