Love- Prison, Bracket And Gravity Poem by sarwar chowdhury

Love- Prison, Bracket And Gravity

Rating: 4.5


I do not know
why
I would like you

Fear comes to me
when i enter in the area of love

LOVE is a chain of prison to fasten me
true that i have seen
I have been

LOVE, the brackets as mathematician use
beside Numbers-
There are open space
up side and down side
but the Numbers can not escape
they are beholden to rules of law
to bring out the rule of law

I love you mean i am bracketed

In spite of that
I contradict myself
Why?
I do not know
I would like you, I like you

Seeing this
and stopping kiss
the Gravity with you and me
loughing and loughing
as mad man on the capital street

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Blue Eyes 19 July 2008

this mixture is great. i like the way u mixed them together ''very poetic''

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Kesav Easwaran 20 August 2008

'I love you mean i am bracketed'... good words...they mean a lot...good write, Sarwar...come to my inbox

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Ye, Why you fear to love? Love makes 2 mes into 1 us. Nicely conceptualized. Love is imprisonment in liberty. Regards with 10 dr. sakti 14.08.08.

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Bele Lele 13 August 2009

Lovely poem.............

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Crystle Jones 22 July 2009

i think everyone here, already said it all. a true masterpiece!

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Anjali Sinha 18 October 2008

sarwar, 'Fear comes to me when i enter in the area of love LOVE is a chain of prison to fasten me true that i have seen I have been' Do u really feel this way? . do not be -come to me i will teach u not be afraid of that arena. Love comes from almighty. Its the best feeling that one can possess. 100/100 for this exposue in a subtle way. regards anju

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Shalini Kts 20 August 2008

its a nice love poem, who ever bracketed you must be lucky to get a poetic person with so much love

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sarwar chowdhury

sarwar chowdhury

Origin- Bangladesh, Living abroad.
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