Not Exact Fantasia Poem by sarwar chowdhury

Not Exact Fantasia

Rating: 4.7


Laughter and Tears
Fears and cheers
are playing with Minds of human

Day and sunlight
night and moonlight
just silent viewer of what you can

Nude is crude but unmasked are fine
limitless Pleasure's kiss can undermine

some people do not like lust and dust
True that the earth is running very fast.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Priyanka Shetty 23 July 2008

good one.... i can get what you are trying to say.... thanks for sharing..

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Wanelisa Albert 26 July 2008

um...Sarwar my friend What is this al about? i dont get it

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Macy Anne 05 August 2008

Some understand some don't. To be honest, this poem is not my favorite, but I give it a well thought out 7! Keep making poems, the crowd loves you

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Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty 15 September 2009

‘…just silent viewer of what you can…’ Stay unidentified with the surrounding happenings. May be it is poet’s say as I understand. But to stay apathetic within milieu of Maya..? Readers reaction please Ten dr. sakti

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Chitra - 30 January 2009

you have a fine eye for observation and equally great quill for sharing your thoughts

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Lily Law 25 September 2008

hi! ! i like the way u play with the words... each line are well connected and expressed.. nice! ! =)

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Mamta Agarwal 18 August 2008

i like the way you have expressed your observations. makes one think.

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Malgorzata Jankowska 13 August 2008

I like it's metre and rhymes. Keep writing Sarwar!

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sarwar chowdhury

sarwar chowdhury

Origin- Bangladesh, Living abroad.
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